This was a crazy experience. I know my piece could have been so much better, but with everything going on I think it felt short of my expectations. Over the weekend I had a German competition, so I couldn't really practice.
Now, for the breakdown of my TED talk. There wasn't a given rubric, so I decided to grade myself based on four topics: Content, memorization, fluency, overall effect, and process.
Content: 4.5/5. As I heard from my friends, I learned that much of the math went over their head. I think I could have done less math and more application, and that way I would uncover more secrets in music which was my main point.
Memorization: 4.5/5. I know I said so many um's that I felt like my presentation wasn't really connected, broken up by so many pauses.
Fluency/Cohesiveness: 3.5/5. Again, this goes along with memorization, but I felt like I had many awkward pauses due to the pictures not loading on time. Additionally, I had to keep on referring back to the PowerPoint and this caused my eye contact to be poor.
Process: 4/5. I didn't really explain the process behind my journey but more of the secrets behind math. I'm not sure
Overall effect: 9/10. I felt like I got my point across, but there was a lot of things that I could have done to have a more profound effect.
That comes out to 25.5/30. I'm not happy with it, but I think it's the score I deserve. More problems that I faced included blanking out on the questions and according to one person, using a Trump-esque technique of dodging certain questions and twisting it.
This has been an incredible journey that if I could do again, I definitely would. I learned so much about myself and other people that these positives continue to outweigh the struggles that I faced during this project.
If I have time, I might be able to record and upload the final performance.
Edit: And here it is! I could only get the first two movements in today, so the rest will probably be uploaded Wednesday for the 2 of you that actually want to see it. I didn't get much time to practice over spring break, and I focused on movement 2 more since I will be playing that for a recital. So the pieces may sound at the same level as the last time I uploaded videos.
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Has the Genius Project changed anything about my piano skills? Not really. Has it affected my work habits? Somewhat. What I really learned, however, is the fact that if you put your mind towards something, nothing can ever stop you. I remember back in 7th grade, we had to do an assignment for Language Arts. You had to choose a quote and explain its meaning. I don't remember the exact quote, but it went something like "Taking the first step is half the journey" (it was NOT Lao Tzu's quote). Before I thought that this quote would never really apply to me, but this project really led me to believe it. The assignment was the first push, but everything else was really a natural "hike," not influenced by any outside factors.
Even though the time I have for piano is slowly dwindling due to schoolwork, it was pure joy to see what it was like to feel "younger" again when it was more of a hobby.
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Hey Evan, good job on your TED talk! I think you did well, although the math did slightly go over my head ;). The thing is, I agree with your stance on making math more interesting. i do get very bored in class often, and so I think it would be nice to be able to enjoy it a bit more.
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Hi Panav,
DeleteI agree that math classes should be changed. Even I get bored in math and it always gives me constant headaches since it's often right after lunch. It's definitely not fun mindlessly solving equations for 80 minutes!
Thanks for commenting!
Hello Evan!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your approach towards making math seem fun. I do like math class now, but before this year math class was pretty boring. Also, you are obviously talented at piano. Your skill is pretty amazing, and your final piece is amazing-er.
Hi James,
DeleteFor me, I believe that the math classes in elementary school were more interesting than the math classes right now. I felt like since our attention span was so short, the teachers needed to have engaging lessons which is not really the case now.
Thanks for the feedback!